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Pretentions and flocks of thought alongside
pondering wings beating,
like hearts and rhymes

I blink and a tear-
but it wont let go
wont grow...
wont let go

pretentions again and the bile rises
acid, pungent,
gripped molars and chipped incisors

Alien limbs and phantom pains
phantoms like ghosts
never existed.

Pretentions and scores of fear inside
scores. No,
footfalls? Echoes.

distractions are abundant,
when you don't believe a word.
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MindConversion Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
"pondering wings beating,"
I love that line!
Really like the whole thing.
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Existence-is-Futile Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
Thanks! :highfive:

Still thinking of getting back to writing, or not so much?
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MindConversion Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
Thinking, yes.
It'll be a case of as soon as the mood strikes, I'll write. Rather than push it.
It'll happen... One day. :S
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Existence-is-Futile Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
Best way - I don't understand people who write for a living. Deadlines make things shitty ^^;
I only ever write at about four in the morning. (:
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