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Seething
searing
flames in my head
burn through my skull
through the words that spit out
like embers
setting light to the room/

Bilious
molten
hot words in my throat
ooze from my mouth
and drip past my heart
like drums
banging in my ears/

I chew at the breath
that labours past my teeth
races through nostrils flared
as nails bury the anger/

Inhale long and icy
hold the breath and hold my tongue
and shiver as I exhale
long ribbons of smoke.
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:iconredwolf518stock:
But, how do you really feel?

Nice imagery in this. It would make a great picture. :D
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:iconexistence-is-futile:
hah - thanks a lot ^^ I think my writing strangled my artistic ability half to death and chopped it's legs off. It just drags itself around my brain, but it can't really go anywhere.
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:iconredwolf518stock:
Go with what's working. Besides, writing is pretty darn creative. Yours especially, because, you know... the no-legs-thing.
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:iconexistence-is-futile:
Are you like my own personal all year santa or something? In a good way. :aww:
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:iconredwolf518stock:
Yep. HoHoHo. See the beard? yep

Sorry, anything else I come up with is in... questionable taste. :D
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:iconmindconversion:
I love the detail and them of this. Really creates an image whilst I'm reading it.

Nicely done!
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:iconexistence-is-futile:
Hey, thanks man :D I think writing's really pushed art out of my head at the moment xD
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:iconmindconversion:
Of course I meant Theme*
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